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| Well, the two other alternatives weren't improvements. The first one was just the first sentence in the current one and the other isn't as relevant. There's not really much of a problem in a "long" quote. Gotta present the dialogue as is from the game, and I couldn't find one sentence in that piece of dialogue that functioned well as a "text illustration" of the subject, know what I mean?
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